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[ale] Microsoft haiku...(OT)
- Subject: [ale] Microsoft haiku...(OT)
- From: danscox at mindspring.com (Danny Cox)
- Date: 24 Jul 2003 17:09:53 -0400
Brian,
A small correction:
On Wed, 2003-07-23 at 18:11, Brian J. Dowd wrote:
> ------------------------------------------
> The Window closes.
> Nothing will open it now.
> Everything lost.
The third line has only 4 sylables. How about "Everything is lost." or
"Everything was lost."?
--
kernel, n.: A part of an operating system that preserves the
medieval traditions of sorcery and black art.
Danny
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